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Chapter 29
Since I was feeling good and sexy, I decided to blow-dry my hair. Emmy had been trying to each me to curl my hair but I still preferred curlers. After putting those in, I applied a light layer of makeup, with a simple black eyeliner. It was all I was comfortable doing.My watch said I had about thi
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Perla De PacasA lot of typos. Definitely need longer chapters
Cheryl Scalicea lot of spelling mistakes that need fixing
ChristineThe book is good I wish Ace would find his mate before Kristen. So she could know how it feels. Can someone fix the grammar. This is a great story. Love reading the story.
DeniseSo many spelling errors! Poor sentences! An editor is very badly needed!
Great story tho!
Sarah MauselochWayne to short chapters!!!!!!!
Nheng DiazPionelo AlmozaraI really hope she will stop calling him out. Very cocky I presume.
Erin Cassidygoos so far
m.franco09I feel bad for Ace.
ChantelReally needs editing gets hard to read/understand
Kita HaspeckI think she is his mate and he told her dad but she will only know when it is her birthday
Mrs. Hthe book is decent so far there is a good story line and great potential. there are some edits that could and should be made it just throws you off when you have to figure out what the author ment to say and you have to get back into the story. other than that I look forward to being drawn in.
Tracy FeethamNice story ,hope she kicks that nasty brich luna befor she goes anywhere, whys there a lot of spelling mistakes in this book it's like every page, did the proof read not check it !!!!
Chris Harris-smithI agree, it wreaked a lot of havoc
Chris Harris-smithoh my god!!! it's on, I put my helmet on ! not in. can anyone besides you morons write? Jesus h christ
Antoniette Mountjoyso glad I am reading this one I love the story to it Hun xx ...
LeeLove the story, but the spelling and editing are atrocious
Natasha DaubneyStory isn’t too bad, but the chapters are ridiculously short for the cost. Bowing out, no way I’m paying for hundreds of chapters of poorly edited story.
Keyri CedilloSo far so good, tho I’m having a hard time getting some of the “jokes?” And seriously, can Ann shut her mouth! Her nasty personality makes me want to hit her ...
eva_louisI wonder if Kris becomes Luna what Ann will do? Sabotage??
Stephanie Lamarche BaronIce needs to challenge Ann!!! She’s such a nasty person
Barb CatlinI’m really enjoying the story but it’s getting harder and harder to overlook the grammar mistakes.
S BShe says it's because she looks to much like her mother.
S BGood book, but the grammatical errors are becoming an issue as they are getting pretty bad.
RondalynI think the proofreading needs to be redone. Otherwise i like the story
Princess DotI’m enjoying the story but 2 things are really starting to annoy me, the autocorrect or proof reader need to try harder as there are lots of mistakes. Also the chapters are random, they don’t come to a natural end, they just stop!
Cassie DownsI’m really starting to like the Dad, but it confuses me with the Ann situation. He obviously cares about his daughter. Ann is going off the deep end though and it’s giving alcoholic vibes
harleyannmoorei like the story, but it looks like auto correct has wrecked havoc
Cheryl GuayWhat is Ann’s issue!
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